Bayard “The Sartoris” Sartoris

In the last three chapters of The Unvanquished, Bayard undergoes a significant identity transformation that deeply affects his sense of self. Granny and John Sartoris’ deaths are two events that thrust Bayard into a reconsideration of his role within the Sartoris family, but more largely, as the heir to a slaveholding and landowning white man in the American South. 

In his chapter “Destruction and Reconstruction,” Atkinson describes The Unvanquished as a narrative of dispossession, citing the ways that for Bayard, “dispossession imprints memory with trauma, initiating an ongoing struggle between the reality of absence and, in turn, the strong desire for recovery and return” (Atkinson, 230). While dispossession usually connotes a deprivation of land, property, or other material possessions, Bayard repossesses/recovers something more abstract: his coming of age as “John Sartoris’s boy” after avenging Granny’s death and his new identity label as “The Sartoris” upon his father’s passing. 

Bayard “proves” himself as worthy of continuing on the Sartoris name by killing Grumby in the name of revenge for Granny. Not only does Bayard shoot Grumby, he and Ringo grotesquely affix his dead body to the “old compress,” which I couldn’t find an adequate definition for, but may be interpreted as her gravesite. Uncle Buck lauds Bayard for this incredibly violent action, boasting, “…‘And if anybody wants to see that too,’ I told John Sartoris, ‘just let them ride into Jefferson and look on Rosa Millard’s grave!’ ‘Ain’t I told you he is John Sartoris’ boy? Hey? Ain’t I told you?” (“Vendée” in The Unvanquished, p. 186). By killing Grumby and avenging Granny, Bayard lives up to one key standard of masculinity that is expected of Southern men, which is using violence to solve problems and show strength. In an earlier section, Drusilla greets Bayard as “John Sartoris”, which I thought was curious. Later, Drusilla’s romantic associations with both John Sartoris and Bayard coupled with that strange greeting led me to believe that Drusilla has always viewed both men as one in the same, especially as Bayard embarks on the path to become his father. 

Uncle Buck emphasizes the importance of Bayard’s reputation in their town as well, as Bayard is poised to succeed John as his only acceptable heir. As head of the family, Bayard would be expected to protect the family’s property, wealth, and family members from harm. Once Bayard and Ringo pin Grumby’s body to the board above Granny’s grave, Ringo says, “Now she can lay good and quiet” (“Vendée”, in The Unvanquished, p. 184). Grumby’s gruesome display represents a recovery of what was taken from Bayard and the Sartorises, signaling that the debt has been repaid and Granny is able to rest. For the reader, this violence may feel uncharacteristic of Bayard, who in previous chapters wanted nothing more than to escape the horror of his reality and conceptualize the brutal scenes before him as matchsticks, toy soldiers, and horses. Although Bayard’s pistol was “level and steady as a rock” when he shot Grumby, he had a dreamlike fit of panic and sadness during his sleep following the event (“Vendée” in The Unvanquished, p. 183). This signifies Bayard’s recurring struggle and inability to fully come to terms with trauma and violence, revealing that Bayard is actually composed of the opposite of these hyper masculine standards to which he is held. Unlike his father, he is able to show emotion and vulnerability. 

Finally, by becoming “The Sartoris,” Bayard’s perception of Ringo shifts into what would be common of a Southern white man who owned enslaved people. Bayard reflects on his changed relationship with Ringo and notes, “I remember how I thought then that no matter what might happen to either of us, I would never be The Sartoris to him…maybe because he had outgrown me…” (“An Odor of Verbena”, in The Unvanquished, p. 215-216). Bayard realizes the weight of what it means to be “The Sartoris” by acknowledging the power dynamic that comes with inheriting his Father’s name and assets. But in this moment, Bayard still holds on to that shred of insecurity from childhood that Ringo has “outgrown” him and will surpass him in life’s journey. Then, Bayard calls attention to Ringo’s pseudo-family relationship with the Sartorises in a new way: 

“…but I rather think it was that same quality which used to enable him to replenish his and Granny’s supply of United States Army letterheads during that time- some outrageous assurance gained from too long and too close association with white people: the one whom he called Granny, the other with whom he had slept from the time we were born until Father rebuilt the house. We spoke one time, then no more…” (“An Odor of Verbena”, in The Unvanquished, p. 217-218). 

This “outrageous assurance” that Ringo gained while living with the Sartorises has the tone that Ringo does not and has never fully belonged in the Sartoris family. In a way that Bayard has never verbalized before, he and his family are reduced to “white people,” which illustrates a sharp contrast along racial lines. Bayard rhetorically minimizes Ringo’s relationship with Granny and himself by saying “the one whom he called Granny”, and “the other whom he had slept from the time we were born,” using “the one” as a way to depersonalize and distance himself and Granny from Ringo. Because Bayard is the narrator, the reader only gets to see one (unreliable/subjective) perspective of his relationship to Ringo. I wonder if Ringo had a piece of this narrative, what would he say? I would want to know how Ringo’s opinion of Bayard has changed as well. 

The deaths of his mother-like and father figure effectively seal Bayard’s transition from adolescence into adulthood. Although everyone around Bayard sees him as an image and successor of his father, Bayard’s sense of self remains tied up in his childhood trauma as he struggles to navigate the complexities and shifting nature of Southern society at the time.

Drusilla Hawk Sartoris: Coping with Loss by Reclaiming the Past

When it has become apparent that the South has lost the Civil War, Drusilla Hawk – while initially incensed and pessimistic – is one of the few characters who immediately begins to contemplate a reimagined future, specifically a future in which women will play a larger role than fulfilling a destiny of serving as dutiful wives, mothers, and symbols of Southern gentility. This vision seems particularly personal and important to Drusilla who, as soon as she is able, joins the war alongside Bayard’s father, John Sartoris, as a soldier, screaming out the rebel yell with her countrymen. When Drusilla does finally reappear, it seems to Bayard as though she has “deliberately tried to unsex herself” (Faulkner 189). Swapping out dresses and parasols for “dirty sweated overalls and shirt and brogans,” Drusilla is empowered to redefine her role as a woman in Southern society and contribute physically to the effort of rebuilding (195).

Drusilla’s determination and vision for her life are no match for societal structures that reassert themselves aggressively during the years of Reconstruction, and Aunt Louisa’s insistence that Drusilla return to wearing dresses and stop working in the fields mirrors Faulkner’s commentary regarding the past’s grip on the future. In the same way that the South copes with its punishing defeat, Drusilla too readjusts her expectations for her life: instead of pursuing independence on her own terms, she seeks out power, influence, and status over others. Not long after John Sartoris tells Drusilla that “they have beat you” are the two prepared to be wed, equating Drusilla’s defeat in attaining independence to a return to the confines of marriage (203). Ironically – or perhaps quite fittingly – Drusilla and John’s marriage at the courthouse is planned for the same day as the first elections organized by carpetbaggers attempting to get Cassius Q. Benbow, an African American, elected Marshal of Jefferson (204). Clad in a wedding dress, veil, and wreath, Drusilla and John go to the courthouse, but instead of marrying, they commit murder. While John convinces the other men outside the courthouse that he acted in self-defense (“We all heard”), Drusilla emerges from the building “carrying the ballot box, the wreath on one side of her head and the veil twisted about her arm” (207). Drusilla is appointed the new voting commissioner, and by the time she arrives back home, her dress is “torn,” her wreath is “twisted,” and her veil is “ruined,” yet she is in full command of the voting box, and thus, the election itself.  

Drusilla may have been forced to return to wearing dresses, but it is now on her own terms, and along with her role as Mrs. Sartoris, Drusilla has ensured that she will command authority and influence politically and socially. In denying the first free elections to take place honestly and peacefully, Drusilla has brought the past back into the present. Surrounding Drusilla who is still wearing her wedding dress, the men who took part in the vote – all voting “No” – reignite the rebel yell from the war, screaming, “‘Yaaaaay, Drusilla!’” and “‘Yaaaaaay, John Sartoris! Yaaaaaaay!’” (210) Described as “ragged and fierce,” Faulkner emphasizes the refusal that both Drusilla and the men have to admit defeat, opting to reignite the same battlecry from the war, but this time instead of weapons, the battle is fought socially and politically.

This obsession with returning or reclaiming the past as a way to cope with loss in the present consumes Drusilla. She doubles down on her hatred of the Northerners and sees her duty as one of vengeance. While walking alongside Drusilla, Bayard reminds her that the carpetbaggers that John killed “were men,” that they were “human beings” (223). Drusilla’s response is only that “they were northerners, foreigners who had no business here. They were pirates” (223). There is an aggressive sense of protectionism that exudes from Drusilla, not unlike the intense odor that exudes from the verbena leaves that she wears behind her ears. This smell is powerful, just like the pull and allure of the past, and even Bayard is unable to fully escape it. While Faulkner suggests Bayard is different from Drusilla and from the other men who seek to uphold outdated social codes, he also suggests that Bayard’s actions alone will never be enough to shift the tide. Upon refusing to avenge his father’s murder through murder, Bayard returns to his bedroom only to be overwhelmed by the smell of the “single sprig” of verbena left lying on his pillow, emitting an odor which one “could smell alone above the smell of horses” (254). Through the verbena scent, Faulkner suggests in the final lines of the novel that the past is not only powerful, but exists in the very air that we breathe.

“She was already beaten”: Drusilla

I learned from “The Digital Yoknapatawpha Project,” an online Wikipedia-like resource edited by students at University of Virginia that the “Skirmish at Sartoris” chapter was originally titled “Drusilla” by Faulkner. I understand the decision to go with “Skirmish…”, yet I feel that “Drusilla” is a more apt and appropriate title considering how she features prominently, especially towards the end of the narrative.  

I do not know why, but for some reason the unnamed narrator-protagonist in Charlotte Perkins Gilman’s short story, “The Yellow Wallpaper” comes to mind as I witness Drusilla’s unraveling—via Bayard Sartoris’s myopic narrative scope/vantage point—during the last two chapters of The Unvanquished. Could the association have been made when there is mention of the “yellow” boards of Granny’s coffin? Or Drusilla’s dreaded “yellow” ball gown? Or is it because of the recurring use of repurposed window shades and wall paper? Is it entirely coincidental that both Drusilla and the unnamed narrator have a patriarchal figure/husband named John, as well as a female chaperone named Jenny/Jennie? I suppose these two female-presented characters warrant comparison because of how the confines within their respective narratives constrict them to the point of madness with no other recourse but to become “hysterical” women. As tempting as it would be to go down that rabbit hole, I will stay on task and explore the “heritage” of the South that weighs down on Drusilla.

I find Drusilla to be a fascinating, enigmatic character. I am far from well-versed, but I would be curious to encounter and engage in a queer and/or feminist reading of Drusilla. Interest is definitely piqued by the following cryptic statement from Bayard: “[Aunt Louisa] had expected the worst ever since Drusilla had deliberately tried to unsex herself by refusing to feel any natural grief at the death in battle not only of her affianced husband but of her own father” (189, emphasis added). What do we think Bayard means when he uses “unsex”? Within the same excerpt, Bayard’s use of “natural” also catches my attention. “Natural” grief to whom? By whom? Lastly, the discordant description of “affianced husband” comes across as slightly silly. Unless a minister and a witness(es) are involved, an affianced husband is still only a fiancé. No need to give Gavin Breckbridge the ball-and-chain status of husband just yet. 

At the start of the “Skirmish at Sartoris” chapter, Bayard flashes back to a tableau which appears—for all intents and purposes—to be a showdown: a battle of the sexes. However, at center stage drawing in these opposing forces is John Sartoris…and Drusilla. Not forgetting that Drusilla ran away from her life in Alabama to spend a period of time riding with Colonel Sartoris and his regiment as an unsexed, disguised soldier (how else would she have been permitted to remain within the homosocial space of the Confederate military?), it would make sense that Drusilla also inhabited “a world ordered completely by men’s doings, even when it is danger and fighting, you don’t want to quit that world: maybe the danger and the fighting are the reasons, because men have been pacifists for every reason under the sun except to avoid danger and fighting” (188). Drusilla wholeheartedly integrates this “world” and its mentality into her being. The tragicomic attempts by Drusilla’s mother to “beat” Drusilla—a mission that is accomplished eventually—are relentless. That is why I interpret the male and female figures within the aforementioned tableau as agents having an intervention of sorts to “beat” and coerce Drusilla back into her sphere as the Southern belle, the “spotless” woman whose “highest destiny”…is “to be the bride-widow of a lost cause” (191). It is unfathomable to all present—Bayard included—to consider what Drusilla wants outside of what is expected of her as a Southern woman. Other than “unsex”, Bayard cannot even articulate with language the possibility of Drusilla inhabiting a sphere that is not altogether male nor female. What is really impactful is to witness as a reader what lengths Southern women (represented by Aunt Louisa, Mrs. Habersham and Mrs. Compson) take to uphold the limited role of their sex. As the reader sees, the prioritization of the optics of how Southern womanhood ought to be presented rivals that of Southern manhood. The ball gown Drusilla is forced to wear by her mother (and later by her husband, John Sartoris) becomes a symbolic straitjacket to “beat” and “whip” her into the dutiful, submissive Southern woman. 

In the optional reading of Professor Allred’s paper, something in the following mention of Drusilla had me wonder: “[t]he plot confronts the prospect of an abstract, race-dissolving citizenship with brutal economy, having John Sartoris and Drusilla Hawk take an unannounced detour on the way to their wedding to murder the Federal officials overseeing the polls. This depiction of masculine sovereignty asserting itself through extralegal violence in the service of what Sartoris calls, without a hint of irony, “law and order,” is unsurprising to the point of cliché” (Allred, 15, emphasis added). What is the reader to make of Drusilla’s involvement in the murder of the voting officials? True, she did not wield “masculine sovereignty” and pull the trigger on either pistol during either of the fatal shots…but, she accompanied John Sartoris into the homosocial space of the makeshift voting area within the hotel as his accomplice. Drusilla’s involvement is further complicated when she does in fact take on the role of “bride-widow of a lost cause” upon John Sartoris’s death, and bequeaths the derringer pistols to her stepson/fourth cousin, Bayard, further along in the narrative. After John nonchalantly sweeps the matter of his arbitrary “law and order” under the rug, I do not quite know how to make out the meaning of Drusilla becoming the appointed “voting commissioner” by John, nor the implications of the voting box being in her hands. 

“Little Toy Men and Horses”: Imagery and Trauma in The Unvanquished

Throughout The Unvanquished, Bayard is confronted with and often is forced to participate in scenes of violence. Although Bayard is fascinated by the war, he is woefully unprepared for the action that he is regularly thrown into. In Ambuscade, Retreat, Raid, and Riposte in Tertio, Faulkner takes a consistent and fascinating approach to describing scenes of war and violence by not describing them or transforming them into unthreatening micro-objects or sounds as seen or heard through the eyes of Bayard. 

In Ambuscade, Bayard and Ringo steal Father’s musket and shoot at what they think is a Union soldier, but they actually hit the horse instead. At the moment of the shooting, Bayard recalls, “…and then my sights came to level and as I shut my eyes I saw the man and the bright horse vanish in smoke. It sounded like thunder and it made as much smoke as a brushfire and I heard the horse scream but I didn’t see anything else…” (p. 26, Ambuscade, in The Unvanquished). Faulkner plays around with the dichotomy of sight/blindness in this quote, as Bayard needs his sight to complete the action of shooting a gun but closes his eyes so as to not see the consequences. The line, “as I shut my eyes I saw” connotes a kind of dreamlike state where Bayard may be able to convince himself that what he saw or didn’t see wasn’t real. This is a narrative style that Faulkner uses throughout these scenes to describe the psychological self-protection mechanism that Bayard uses to shield himself from traumatic situations. Bayard relies only on the sounds of this event to give him information about it, which can sometimes be less threatening or shocking than seeing the actual aftermath. 

In Retreat, Bayard actually gives voice to these protection mechanisms by reflecting, “There is a limit to what a child can accept, assimilate; not to what a child can believe because a child can believe anything, given time, but to what it can accept, a limit in time, in the very time which nourishes the believing of the incredible” (p. 66, Retreat, in The Unvanquished). This line is interesting because it contains a heavier and more complex wisdom than Bayard in his child state could put forth, which leads me to believe that this could either be an older Bayard reflecting back on this time or Faulkner himself inserting his own reflections. This pause in Bayard’s chaotic childlike narration brings the reader back to Earth for a second to grasp how traumatizing it must be for a child to exist in a space of war where violence is unpredictable and a father expects his child to join in on the action. In the next part of the line, Bayard says, “And I was still a child at that moment when Father’s and my horses came over the hill and seemed to cease galloping and to float, hang suspended rather in dimension without time in it…and looked quietly down at the scene beneath rather than before us…” (p. 66, Retreat, in The Unvanquished). This is another instance where Bayard creates a dreamlike state for himself in a time of stress by imagining a distance from it; an almost out of body experience where he gets to look down at the scene unharmed while it happens before him. 

In Raid and Riposte in Tertio, Bayard implements a new protection mechanism by imagining violent action as regular micro household objects. Because Bayard is deprived of his hearing due to the bridge blowing up, he is forced to use his eyes to process what is going on in front of him. He says, “I didn’t hear anything at all. I just sat there in the wagon with a funny buzzing in my ears and a funny taste in my mouth, and watched little toy men and horses and pieces of plank floating along in the air above the water” (p. 106, Raid, in The Unvanquished). Bayard is unable to remove himself from the situation here, so his brain creates a pseudo-playful image of toys, which reminds him of his status as a child and may even remind him of the comforts of home. Faulkner also plays around with scale too. Whenever possible, Bayard conceptualizes objects before him in a traumatic situation as “little” or mentally distances himself from them. By contrast, Bayard regularly describes his Father as “big,” which conveys the way that Bayard/Faulkner uses scale to measure things that are important to him or worth paying attention to. 

Finally, Bayard conceptualizes the worst trauma of all, Granny’s death, as a pile of “thin dry light sticks notched together and braced with cord” (p. 153, Riposte in Tertio, in The Unvanquished). Although Bayard is older now (?), his depersonalization of Granny’s dead body into inanimate sticks shows that he still holds on to the protection mechanisms that he used in his childhood to process emotional stress. This thread of alternative description of trauma and violence that runs through The Unvanquished allows the reader a glimpse into what life must have been like for a young boy in the South during the Civil War who saw far too much far too young. It also makes me wonder about Faulkner’s experiences and how this book may be his way of processing his own trauma and memories from his childhood.

Growing Pains in “The Unvanquished”

The initial impression of Bayard Sartoris—upon making his acquaintance as the first-person narrator-character guiding the reader through the events he recounts in The Unvanquished—is that he is a bit peculiar…but because of his peculiarity, he is also intriguing. It does not take long for the reader to grasp that Bayard is an adult narrating the story of his coming of age—a time which is all the more significant because his passage into “manhood” coincides alongside the unfolding of the American Civil War. 

Within the assigned reading, Bayard’s narrative spans the end of his childhood years—beginning with him at 12 years old close to turning 13 years old—with its accompanying “child’s make-believe” (95) fantasies and naïveté, and ends with him at 15 years old. To what degree has one of the many casualties from the American Civil War—the way of life in the South—been destroyed? And, how has the disruption of the then-prevailing economic system and social order affect two particular personages from that now defunct order: namely, Bayard’s father (Colonel John Sartoris aka “Father”); and, to a greater extent, Bayard’s maternal grandmother (Rosa Millard aka “Granny”). With the progression of the war always looming in the background yet ever-present, Bayard observes at different junctures of the narrative how it reveals “little”-ness onto Father, and subsequently, onto Granny. 

The shift in how Bayard sees Father in a different light occurs at the beginning of the novel. In a moment of comparison using a flashback within a flashback, Bayard contrasts the appearance of his father from the spring only a few months back—presumably in conjunction with the start and/or early stage of the war—to the moment where he decides to start the story. Bayard notices that his father’s appearance is more bedraggled than in the spring: “…[Father’s] boots dark and dustcaked too, the skirts of his weathered gray coat shades darker than the breast and back and sleeves where the tarnished buttons and the frayed braid of his field officer’s rank glinted dully (9, my italics). This visual description suggests how the Confederate troops are doing in the war (or, at least, how Father’s regiment is doing) that then leads Bayard to hone in on Father’s stature: “Then we could see him good. I mean, Father. He was not big; it was just the things he did, that we knew he was doing, had been doing…that made him seem big to us” (9). Bayard then reiterates his observation a few sentences later: “[Father] was not big, yet somehow he looked even smaller on the horse than off of him, because Jupiter was big and when you thought of Father you thought of him as being big too” (9-10). Bayard shares his observation on the optics of positioning and perspective both in how Father appears “big” with the help of his horse, Jupiter, as well as the encounter between Granny and Father when they greet each other: “[Father] could have stood on the same level with Granny and he would have only needed to bend his head a little for her to kiss him. But he didn’t. He stopped two steps below her, with his head bared…and the fact that Granny had to stoop a little now took nothing from the illusion of height and size which he wore for us at least” (10). This newly realized sense of Father’s smallness recurs when Bayard refers to him simply as “the little man” (13). I believe the “child’s make believe” and “illusion” Bayard has of Father’s seeming grandiosity—held up until he is 12 years old, at least—are in opposition to how he now sees Father. Somehow the war nullifies a version of Father as the Southern gentleman/plantation owner/head of household/patriarch/colonel figure, and Bayard sees a version of him with prescient eyes.

Comparatively, the continual unfolding of war take its toll by taking its time with Granny. As opposed to the opening scene as well as a later scene, Father is an absentee figure to Bayard in the story. Granny, however, is the caretaker/maternal/parental figure who, pathetically, is worn down and wearied as collateral damage by the war. Granny is present throughout the chapters, but, as the war continues, Bayard observes and divulges a steady, gradual decline: “Granny was strong and thin and light as a cat…” (74) to her deterioration into “a lot of little thin dry light sticks” (154). As the narrative and the concomitant war progress, Bayard observes Granny: “looking sicker and sicker” (103), to looking “old and tired. I [Bayard] hadn’t realized how old and little she was” (108); Bayard then goes to say how Granny “looked littler than Cousin Denny” (137)…the pathos of Granny’s deterioration continues: “she looked littler than anybody I could remember, like during the four years she hadn’t got any older or weaker, but just littler and littler…” (143); and, before her ultimate demise, Bayard observes that Granny “was small between us, little; she talked quiet, not loud, not fast and not slow; her voice sounded quiet and still” (146). Coming from the generation before Colonel Sartoris who will have to reconstruct a new life and identity, Granny withers away much like the losing South she embodies. 

For the sake of remaining within the word count of the post, I limited the observations Bayard makes to Father and Granny. However, I am also intrigued by Bayard’s observations of his cousin, Drusilla; and, of course, I am very curious to see how the dynamics will shift between Bayard and Ringo, in light of how the “Riposte in Tertio” chapter ends. 

“Perhaps We Were the Two Moths”

A preoccupation with sleep permeates much of the first four parts of The Unvanquished. This focus seems to serve a couple of different functions in the text. First, it appears to highlight the degree of trauma that Bayard and Ringo experience during the war years by drawing attention to the myriad points at which they are jolted awake by some new war-related episode, such as the numerous moves of the trunk filled with the Sartoris silver. Sleep, then, is viewed as both a temporary escape from the war and as a source of fear of what is yet to come. Sleep therefore appears to Bayard to be a permeable border between a somewhat normal world (as normal as their world can be in wartime) and the world of direct contact with the war, and the line between sleeping and waking is often blurred in the novel. A prime example of this occurs in the following text, which marks the moment at which Ringo and Bayard, barely awake as they continue their flight from the Union forces who accosted them the day before on the road to Memphis, are intercepted by unknown assailants who prove to be Bayard’s father and his men: “Perhaps that was it, perhaps we were still asleep, were taken so suddenly in slumber that we had not time to think of Yankees or anything else”

A second dimension of the fixation on sleep is its association with a lack of power or knowledge. Those who indulge in sleep are portrayed as being vulnerable during a time in which vulnerability was a dangerous thing. Bayard describes how Granny and Ringo, while carrying out their mule theft and reselling scheme, would strike their targets at supper time because the soldiers would often be sleepy and therefore not at their most perceptive.

Additionally, Drusilla underlines what she sees as the positive aspects of forgoing sleep: “‘Why not stay awake now? Who wants to sleep now, with so much happening, so much to see?” (100). And for Ringo and Bayard, Loosh’s apparent lack of sleep appears to deepen the wisdom that they have already ascribed to him in terms of his knowledge of the current state of the war. As they follow him in an attempt to gain access to the information he has, they see him “with that look on his face again which resembled drunkenness but was not, as if he had not slept in a long time and did not want to sleep now” (22).

Bayard and Ringo attempt to increase their war-related knowledge by forgoing sleep in order to listen to war stories told by Bayard’s father and by Drusilla. Upon Colonel Sartoris’s brief return at the beginning of the novel, they are thwarted in this desire, so they instead sit on the stairs, in a state somewhere between wakefulness and sleep, listening to Sartoris speaking to Granny in secret about the state of the war. Bayard states, “Perhaps it was the dark or perhaps we were the two moths, the two feathers again … because suddenly Louvinia was standing over us, shaking us awake” and “…I knew we had slept on the stairs for some time” (18). Bayard’s repeated characterization of himself and Ringo as moths (as he does earlier in the first section: “the two supreme undefeated like two moths, two feathers rising above a hurricane” (7)) reveals his desire to be able to rise above and to be omniscient observers of all that is going on around them, although his choice of moths also implies fragility in the face of great peril. In another instance, Bayard seems to be struggling with feelings of inferiority to Ringo. As they are traveling toward the railroad at Hawkhurst, which Bayard is careful to remind us he has seen while Ringo has not, Bayard appears to be keeping close tabs on Ringo as they travel as if to ensure that he does not acquire any knowledge that Bayard does not have and appears satisfied that he spends much of the trip asleep:

I took the parasol and he laid down in the wagon and put his hat over his eyes. ‘Call me when we gitting nigh to Hawkhurst,’ he said, ‘so I can commence to look out for that railroad you tells about.’ That was how he travelled for the next six days–lying on his back in the wagon bed with his hat over his eyes, sleeping, or taking his turn holding the parasol over Granny and me and keeping me awake by talking of the railroad which he had never seen though which I had seen that Christmas we spent at Hawkhurst. (81)

Drusilla, Dru. Dru, Drusilla.

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The Unvanquished (TU) provides a space for the characters of women to be bold and courageous, something that has been uncommon in Faulkner’s work. Normally, women in Faulkner’s texts are seen as traditional women who are meek, sensitive, and powerless. However, in TU, Drusilla is a character who embodies the male spirit, especially during the Civil War. She is strong and unafraid, and respectable in the eyes of the male figures in the text, especially young Bayard Sartoris.

We’re first introduced to Drusilla (Dru) in the chapter “Raid.” Bayard compares her to the likes of a man several times in our introduction. For example he states, “…Cousin Drusilla riding astride like a man and sitting straight and light as a willow branch in the wind. They said she was the best woman rider in the country.” and again, “Then she saw me. She was not tall, it was the way she stood and walked. She had on pants, like a man. She was the best woman rider in the country;…” (89). Bayard admires and even respects his cousin. He can admire her, while also acknowledging that she is still a woman. The repeated phrase, “She was the best woman rider in the country, ” makes her an equal to a male counterpart with the same skill set.

It’s clear that Drusilla rejects the traditional values that are placed onto women. In the midst of the Civil War, she takes advantage of the freedom that has been granted to her so briefly. During the war, Drusilla was free to  embody the qualities and lifestyle that was granted to men. Being able to live like a “man,” Drusilla is able to reflect and comment that there’s much more to life than just growing up in “your father’s house.With her taste for freedom, Drusilla believes it be almost like a dream in which she doesn’t want to get up because if she were to wake up from her dream, then she’ll be forced to go back to living an ordinary life, which is something she is strictly against. Drusilla almost wishes that it wouldn’t end or that it didn’t have to. She doesn’t want to live a routined life. The war has given her so much to think about and experience:

 Who wants to sleep now, with so much happening, so much to see? Living  used to be dull, you see. Stupid. You lived in the same house your father was born in and your father’s sons and daughters had the sons and daughters of the same negro slaves to nurse and coddle, and then you grew up and you fell in love with your acceptable young man and in time you would marry him, in your mother’s wedding gown perhaps and the same silver for presents she had received, and then you settled down forever… (100-101).

Interestingly, Drusilla used the word “stupid” to describe her life before the war. Or more specifically, life for a woman before the war. She describes life as being simple and ordinary; you’re born, live in your father’s house, grow up with brothers and sisters, fall in love, get married, and on and on the cycle goes. It offers no excitement or alternate perspective to living except for the one simple fact that as a woman, you’re destined to perpetuate this cycle of being confined to the house and familial duties. Drusilla doesn’t want the simple kind of life, she doesn’t want to be sheltered from the experiences real life has to offer.

 

For women, traditional values only point in one direction: family. Men have their own set of traditional values, but many of these values overlap. Men aren’t bound to the home the way women are. Being a man means experiencing life, taking action, having flexibility. These are just some attributes Drusilla wishes she can take on without having to be a man. I think she questions if there can be such a life/or time for a woman to live outside the boundaries of tradition.

Faulkner and the fantastic

After delving into the mind of Faulkner in two of his texts, I’ve come to realize the manner in which he embraces fantasy. Characters in their youth who go on massive escapades through bizarre situations serve as a driving vehicle for his narrative delivery and more often than not, vignettes are told through the lens of one who is discovering Faulkner’s world, a world rooted in reality where any number of variables might interfere in the character’s objectives.

In TSAF, Quentin Jr. and her mother prove emblematic in their sense of escaping from the confines of what is socially acceptable and cause supposed “societal degradation” because of it. With regard to these female voyagers, Faulkner seems to imply that though they are flawed in ways that are taboo and inconceivable, their incentive to explore foreign, deviant horizons is a natural byproduct of their societal circumstances and by comparison to the oppressive Jason whose worldview is so narrow, we ought to admire them as the free souls that they possess.

Coincidentally, “freedom” from the bounds of society serves as an intricate theme in our latest novel, The Unvanquished, and though said freedom leads to quite the muck and mire, it also sets the stage for a fantastic voyage of two faux-brothers and their family unit. The traumatic catalyst of Bayard and Ringo shooting down a Yankee soldier leads to exodus from the houses and encounters with the unfathomable in the forms of riding alongside exotic frontier soldiers (one of whom is Bayard’s father), escorting a railroad’s worth of fleeing and even accidentally “forgetting” Granny in a wagon on the trails. At one point, Bayard has a revelation: “There is a limit to what a child can accept… And I was still a child at that moment when Father’s and my horses came over the hill and seemed to cease galloping and to float” (Faulkner 66). The scene is painted in such a way as to capture the awe of a child at beholding the remarkable nature of an unforgettable moment and in many respects, Faulkner capitalizes on this sense of boyish ambition to experience the world.

Ringo serves as an interesting specimen from which to consider Faulkner’s association with the fantastic. Ringo is a boy who is assimilated into the Sartoris family despite his opposite skin color, a concept beyond profound for its time. As the books develops, Ringo takes on a more assuming role striking bargains with rival Yankees and leading the front lines of the battlefield alongside Colonel Sartoris (67 – 68). The extent to which Ringo has availed himself of the societal standards attributed to blacks is remarkable and elevate him to a status far greater than the stereotypical nature attributed to Jim and Huck in The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn; Ringo is Bayard’s equal, at least to the point where they consider each other family.

Faulkner is attributed with “spinning tales with more verisimilitude than veracity” (Porter 1) and so far, TSAF and The Unvanquished have shown this to hold weight. Although Faulkner’s stretches of the imagination in these novels often venture off into the unfathomable,  his use of historically relevant landmarks and time frames in his home state of Mississippi only aids in generating unforgettable moments within his character’s escapades thereby allowing him to comment on an array of themes centered around the human condition.

The Other side of the tracks in The Unvanquished

The railroad in The Unvanquished initially appears to be part of the terrain, dividing physical territory as well as serving as a marker of superiority in Bayard’s personal relationship with Ringo; however, as the railroad comes into view as it is, not as it is remembered, it instead represents contested narrative space—of the social order as well as of the war itself. When Bayard initially describes the railroad, he emphasizes its significance as a marker of his superiority over Ringo, his black slave play-fellow. This is already a friendship that reflects an ambiguity of the racial social order, yet what serves to distinguish between the two is not “the difference in the color of [their] skins” but “what one of us had done or seen that the other had not” (81). For Bayard, the trump card is the sight of “a railroad, a locomotive” (81). Further, the railroad seems to be defined by its structural integrity and order. As Bayard describes his first sighting of the railroad with Cousin Denny and Granny, “it was the straightest thing I ever saw, running straight and empty and quiet through a long empty gash cut through the trees…straighter than any river, with the crossties cut off even and smooth and neat” (87). The sight of the railroad is awe-inspiring in part because of its meticulous maintenance of order in defiance of a kind of wild (untidy?) nature that surrounds it: it is “straighter than any river,” and runs “straight and empty and quiet…through the trees”; its ties are “cut off even and smooth and neat.”

This beauty of order is something withheld from Ringo, the black character, to whom the railroad is a symbol of (his) lack. However, as Bayard narrates Ringo’s perspective, he links the sight of the railroad to motion itself, which becomes intertwined with an idea of racial progress. It is “the rushing locomotive” that stands in for “the motion, the impulse to move which had already seethed to a head among [Ringo’s] people, darker than themselves…seeking a delusion, a dream, a bright shape which they could not know since there was nothing in their heritage” (81). The railroad then symbolically represents a rupture within the continuity of their enslavement, a sight of a “bright shape” to which “nothing in their heritage” could prepare them. The associated adjectives apportioned to each perspective are also telling: for the whites, the railroad is of a measured progress that is, above all, noticeable in its order; for the black community, the railroad pushes forward, even before there is thought of a destination. When Ringo excitedly searches for sight of the railroad, Bayard notes that the sight is one “he would have to find in order to catch up with me and which he would have to recognise only through hearsay when he saw it” (86). Ringo’s knowledge of the railroad is as “shape”less as the dream of freedom for the slaves, but it does not diminish his commitment to seeing (experiencing) it.

Yet what they find is not the railroad that Bayard once saw, but its obliterated ruins, the neat rails and tracks reduced to “piles of black straws heaped up every few yards” with “each rail…tied…around a tree” (88). The destruction of the railroad splinters the tracks and uproots the rails; the movement of the train is permanently stopped. For Bayard, it not only disrupts the power dynamic he has with Ringo, but the very narrative of the war itself. Bayard himself feels determined to find out what happened to the railroad in part “to keep even with Ringo (or even ahead of him, since I had seen the railroad when it was a railroad, which he had not)” (93). The earlier dynamic seems to have been confused, if not upended; Bayard himself is unclear about whether they are on even standing after the glimpse of the destroyed railroad, or if there is now ground he needs to regain. As they learn the story of the destruction of the railroad, it mutates again: representing neither progress nor order, but negative narrative space. The space of the railroad becomes a focal point for Bayard and Ringo both who “waited and watched that railroad which no longer existed, which was now…a few threads of steel…annealing into the living bark, becoming one and indistinguishable with the jungle growth…but which for us ran still pristine and intact and straight and narrow as the path to glory itself” (96). While Bayard imagines that it “ran still pristine” for “us,” it’s difficult to imagine Ringo included in that “us.” The ideal railroad that Bayard recalls no longer stands; in its place, the sight that remains is of a single moment, existing “inside the scope of a single pair of eyes and nowhere else, coming from nowhere and having, needing, no destination, the engine…arrested in human sight” (98). The railroad remains frozen in place, sourceless and without any continuing direction; the destructive moment of rupture yields not change and progression, but a vacuum.