comments on medium wiki #2

I’ve sent individual comments via email to every student (BA + MA) who has submitted a second medium-length entry.  A couple of thoughts:

–the pot’s a bit light, as they say in Texas Hold ‘Em: if you haven’t posted at least two medium-length entries, make arrangements to do so or otherwise get in touch, since these assignments are a very substantial part of the grade.

–make sure to use tagging to designate, at a minimum, the length of the entry and the text/s it concerns.  So an entry on Lena will be tagged MEDIUM and LIA, plus perhaps GENDER or MOVEMENT or whatever else you can think of.

–I’m really pleased with what you’ve done so far as a group (well, two groups, technically): the second entries, on the whole, were markedly improved from already strong first entries.  Things are shaping up nicely.

–if you did an entry but didn’t get feedback, get in touch and I’ll look into it.

No Need to Speak

From the very start of As I Lay Dying, Darl is established not just as a primary narrator in the novel, but also as the most eccentric character. Often, narrations given by other characters are sandwiched between his own in a constant affirmation of his primacy. At the same time, though, his peculiar perspective only sets him farther apart from, rather than above, the rest of his family; indeed, it alienates him from them, as sometimes his singularity elicits an almost prophetic nature. I argue, however, that this capacity for clairvoyance runs through the Bundren family with more fluidity than readers, or the characters themselves, may naturally perceive. Granted, Darl often appears to be the common force bestowing this special ability upon the others; still, in different degrees they all reflect a common sensitivity.

Products of their parents, the Bundren children (excepting Jewel, on account of his only partial biological relation) all reflect the strange influence of Anse and Addie’s complicated union. In other words, the way the Bundren children relate to their world is inherently based on how they relate to their parents’ idiosyncrasies: their collective criticalness of Anse’s moral deficiencies, and simultaneously, their inheritance of his tendency towards metaphor; from Addie, they assume a drastic stoicism and a confused relationship with words, names and labels. Indeed, even Addie’s sole narration in the novel reveals, for example, a likely source of the similarly existential crisis Dewel Dell experiences in her own nightmare-state: “I couldn’t think what I was I couldn’t think of my name I couldn’t even think I am a girl I couldn’t even think I” (121). Similarly, Addie’s assessment of words combined with Anse’s metaphorical reasonings regarding the physical formations of all God’s creatures seems to similarly influence Vardaman’s conception of his mother as a fish, his brother Jewel, a horse.

Moreover on the discourse of words, Darl and Dewey Dell exhibit a relationship in which words are often unnecessary, if not outright irrelevant. They communicate, the both of them, and comprehend each other, “without words” (27). In fact, as Dewey Dell notes, the certainty of their mutual understanding would actually be compromised if the expressions were vocalized: “[I]f he had said he knew with the words I would not have believed that he had been there and saw us” (27). The notion that non-verbal expressions can manifest such power is further emphasized by Dewey Dell when she describes the immense capacity embodied in Darl’s eyes: “The land runs out of Darl’s eyes; they swim to pin points. They begin at my feet and rise along my body to my face, and then my dress is gone” (121). In this instance, Darl doesn’t just successfully express a simple sentiment to Dewey Dell; he penetrates her psyche, disarming her with one sweeping, yet incisive look.

Darl and his older brother Cash, too, reveal an ability to understand one another outside the realm of verbal communication. Before the catastrophe at the river, for example, Darl describes this nature: “[Cash] and I look at one another with long probing looks, looks that plunge unimpeded through one another’s eyes . . . When we speak our voices are quiet, detached” (142). Clearly, the brothers engage more naturally through facial expressions than verbal ones. Indeed, twice more in the same narration, Darl and Cash communicate without words. First, Darl describes a memory of Addie holding Jewel on a pillow longer than his infant body, but he doesn’t speak his remembering. So when Cash so casually responds as if, with ease, he could hear Darl’s thoughts aloud, readers may almost miss the unspoken transmission that has taken place between the brothers. And again, as they reach the place where they will attempt the river-crossing, Cash must merely look at Darl in order to ask if he join in the undertaking.

Memories

“Memory believes before knowing remembers. Believes longer than recollects, longer than knowing even wonders.” Chapter six of Light in August begins this way. Readers are given an extremely vivid description of one of Christmas’ most intimate memories, the one with the toothpaste. Though it may seem insignificant, when looking for secondary and tertiary meanings under the primary literal one, as readers we can infer the effects of toothpaste.

“Once in the room, he went directly on his bare and silent feet to the washstand and found the tube. He was watching the pink warm coil smooth and cool and slow onto his parchmentcolored finger when he heard footsteps in the corridor and just beyond the door.” There are many things in these few sentences. One, we know Christmas is a very quiet boy. It also seems clear that he is often unnoticed; “…he was like a shadow, small even for five years, sober and quiet as a shadow.” The interesting thing about shadows are even though they are associated with the dark, they need the light to exist. The squeezing of the toothpaste onto his finger airs on the side of sexual and phallic. There is an image of a worm-like thing coming out of a bigger thing, or maybe there is a suggestion of ejaculation.  As the memory progresses Christmas is “squatted, among delicate shoes and suspended soft womangarments…pink-and-white…making his mouth think of something sweet and sticky to eat, and also pinkcolored…when he discovered the toothpaste in her room he had gone directly there, who had never heard of toothpaste either, as if he already knew that she would possess something of that nature and he would find it (p.120).” Before things were obviously phallic but very quickly there comes a switch between manliness and femininity. Christmas finds himself surrounded by womanly things and even seems to like it. He uses the word “delicate” which suggests a calm, gentle tone when describing or thinking about women. The toothpaste also belongs to the woman and he can taste something sweet and sticky, the implication blurred between whether Christmas is referring to the toothpaste or his ‘fantasy’ of woman.  The toothpaste is also not his, despite being five, Christmas knows the toothpaste isn’t his and what he is doing is wrong; “When they went away, he would replace the toothpaste and also leave (p.121).” Christmas is semi-aware of the difference between right and wrong at a young age. Toothpaste also serves as a representation of modernity. Toothpaste is something from the city, maybe even only the elite use it. There is the obvious meaning of hygiene and cleanliness, also the toothpaste belongs to a dietician which is very ‘modern.’

In one memory we learn quite a bit about Christmas. He is like a shadow, which means he is quiet, often lurking, and often falls into the background, alone. He also seems to be ‘obsessed’ with modernity, represented in the toothpaste, but cannot handle it hence his vomiting. Or maybe for the reader it represents Christmas’ attempt at modernity but it is taken away from him. “Memory believes before knowing remembers. Believes longer than recollects, longer than knowing even wonders.” Chapter six begins with this quote. What we believe is the truth stays longer with us than what we know we remember and maybe what we think happened never happened at all. Christmas shares a memory from age five. Who Christmas is at present and who he was at five are different, what Christmas understood to have happened could have changed with perception as he aged.